When it comes to the art of literary translation, there are many elements and nuances to which the translator must attend, and in this regard, poetry offers a particularly slippery substrate. If a poem takes on different shapes and meanings every time you come to it as a reader of the same language in which the poet has written, the translator must also be comfortable with a certain openness that will allow others to enter it from the outside. But when a poet celebrates such fluidity in her creative process from its earliest moments, what possibilities and potential might that inspire in her translator? Or might that be translators?
Consider this: poet and translator Katrine Øgaard Jensen has translated the expansive, organic poetic trilogy of Danish poet Ursula Andkjær Olsen—Third Millennium Heart, Outgoing Vessel, and My Jewel Box (all from Action Books)—a “fairytale of the universe” that explores the body and its internal and external existence, in relation to birth, society, economics, and nature. But their relationship, as poet and translator, rests on, as all translation ideally does, a ground of collaboration and trust.
Consider this: Ursula Andkjær Olsen doesn’t view her poetry as original work, but rather a translation of an idea—an idea of which she is simply the first translator.
But why stop there? For Jensen, Olsen’s thematic and creative approach offered the inspiration for a generative, collaborative project of evolving intentional mistranslations—one that not only involves both poet and translator, but invites other poet translators to engage with the Danish originals (that is, “first” incarnations) and their “second” translations, following their own uniquely rule-defined imaginings to create new, unique poems to which Jensen responds, before returning her new mistranslation back to her collaborator and so on. Ancient Algorithms is the result of this project.
Jenson’s collaborators, or co-conspirators, are Sawako Nakayasu, Aditi Machado, Paul Cunningham, Baba Badji, CAConrad, and of course, Olsen herself. Each collaboration takes a slightly different approach, but most begin with a poem selected from Olsen’s trilogy. The original piece is presented, first in Danish, and then in Jensen’s published translation. The collaborating poet translator then sets the rule or process that will guide their mistranslation. Jensen then takes the resulting poem, sets new rules for further mistranslation, and the collaborator responds again. Where Olsen is the collaborator (an act she seems to really delight in), Jensen makes the first mistranslation. With CAConrad, Conrad’s own work with ancient technologies and rituals in poetry inspires the approach. Suffice to say, the individual poetic styles and sensibilities of the poets involved shape the transformations and reincarnations that arise from each collaborative sequence, but throughout it all, echoes of Olsen’s distinctive worldly—and otherworldy—vision can be detected. Each poet translator, an outgoing vessel, carries signals forward. Stop anywhere along the way and you can hear them:
i do not know if
language must be paid forit is barely audible
the wind’s currents stir my body’s tissues
which the generalized eardrum
located in the vase of my swollen belly
channels into the uterus and the world
its box, its ear, its mouth
resounds(from “i am tasting the sun” – Aditi Machado)
Even when the newly birthed poems may weave in yet other languages as in those of multi-lingual Senegalese American poet Baba Badji, they are present, but lead to new universes and perspectives:
lengthen further my femur, tibia & fibula
for life to relive itself in my body,
maa gni mâgg, dinna mâgg, yeena gni mâgg,
in virtuous reliance and gratuitous strength—superfluous, luksuriøst, and queer. Without machismo
there are no breaks, there are no tears, there is love,
and bodies, in bodies, we might have a base to stand ontowers of Babel dying de plus en plus rouge
castles, târne, du—moi—long graffiti for a beggar’s memo.(from “Artificial Culture and Nature Are Not Luxury”)
It is, of course, impossible to trace the complete transition of any one poetic collaboration and the poems that emerge within the restrictions of a few short quotes in a review, but each one is a dynamic, incantatory act of co-creation emitting an energy that is at once mystical and futuristic. But there is more. In the final section of Ancient Algorithms, Jensen and Olsen craft a series of games for poet translators. Even for readers who are themselves neither poets nor translators but are actively engaged with poetry and literature in translation, these activities spark the kinds of ideas that are fun and worthwhile to think about. And then, in closing, Jensen has gathered a collection of “Inspirations & Further Readings.”
Last, but not least, consider this:
When I first read Third-Millennium Heart I was so completely absorbed by its vision and magic I knew that I would not only write about it, but that my response would have to be both poetic and experimental. (Published on Minor Literature[s] in 2018, if interested the PDF can be opened here.) As Olsen’s trilogy evolved, I welcomed Outgoing Vessel and My Jewel Box in turn, and have read the complete set many times. I even had the honour of speaking with Olsen and Jensen on a live Zoom broadcast several years ago. Now that I am learning to read Danish myself, to be able to begin with a selection of Olsen’s poems in Danish, read through Jensen’s translations, and on into the permutations and re-imaginings that emerge with such a fine group of poet translators is a special treat.
But one that is also recommended for anyone who loves poetry and the art of translation.
Ancient Algorithms by Katrine Øgaard Jensen with Ursula Andkjær Olsen, Sawako Nakayasu, Aditi Machado, Paul Cunningham, Baba Badji, CAConrad is published by Sarabande Books.
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